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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-11-24 11:38 PM




Where legends live
and the thunder drums
~~~~
I explore the blue shadow
of your spirit
which gently caresses
the blue shadow in mine.

I lift my eyes
to see your whispers
on the wind of my time.
Your love claims my heart
~~~~
takes it to the summit,
shakes it to the core.

I am crying out
into the night
where blue turns to pure:
pure love, pure joy.
~~~~
I dance through the eons
of your eternity...and I find
the other side of Heaven.

Angels, white-robed, sing
the song that eternities built.
My love formed, forged
in the blue heat
that singes the deep Eye
who knows who I am, what
I want to be in your arms.

And, I build legends
while the thunder
drums your love
into the silence
of my night dreams
~~~~
eternities passing by
in the wink of Love's blue eye.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry
1 posted 2002-11-25 03:51 AM


Beautiful!
Enjoyed much!

Poetry is love and love is life.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-11-25 09:38 AM


Ivy Rose - your thoughts come out in your most beautiful words. I'm glad I saw this to read this morning...

BC

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3 posted 2002-11-25 12:55 PM






(smiles) Oh Ivy, I just love the thunder you flare up in your words, sweet friend, may your heart always beat like a conga drum of a mighty warrior of love, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-11-25 01:29 PM



In my mind's eye you are a Spirit Writer and you write equally well on both the primal and ethereal realms.

I feel your poetry.

Earth Angel

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-11-26 05:43 AM


I enjoyed this poem, this verse was my favorite.

I dance through the eons
of your eternity...and I find
the other side of Heaven.

Well done.  

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2002-11-27 06:10 PM




seems to be the only place love endures.......not in THIS world

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