Open Poetry #23 |
Winter Winds (20 or less) |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Winter winds Possessing snow Biting cold Down to your toes Winter wear Gloves and hat Wrapping toes With warming rags. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
were you ever called a ragamuffin when little??? *s |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
brrrrr. I hate snow, okay I hate the cold, your poem gave me a chill. But in a good way. Great job.! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
So these rags...are they more like mittens or gloves? Just getting a mental pic...lol. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, sweets... so very much! You've captured so much in such a few words. *S* First, the marvelous images that bring winter's breath right through the screen... then a great big smile for the wrapped toes... and then a wave of compassion for those who have so little to protect them from the elements. This is simply superb!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have this precious picture in my mind of you, as a little boy, all lovingly bundled up in your winter wear and braving the cold on your way to school. ~ May the winds in your life blow gently and take you where you want to go EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well Mr. Toe, I got an image kinda like Linda's, but I saw you as a little boy all bundled up real warm. Then, when your Mama wasn't looking you got some rags real warm, took your little shoes and socks off and wrapped each little toe with a warm rag. Then, you put your socks over them, holding them in place so you could put your shoes on. That's probably what happened for you to get your nickname. Right?!? "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write Toe! Well done! ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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