We are similar in our differences

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Open Poetry #23

We are similar in our differences

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-11-23 05:33 PM

I can’t sleep. You’re the cause of this.
We are similar in our differences.
And I love you because of this.

I adore the hue of your crimson lips
You are mischievous and I’m innocent.
I can’t sleep. You’re the cause of this.

I find closeness in all our distances.
As I tread the path with my fingertips
We are similar in our differences.

And I love you because of this...

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2002-11-23 05:52 PM

Loved this. you said what i feel. can totally relate to your words. i not only cant sleep, i cant concentrate on what i should* be doing! it's all their fault!wish i could have written this, to the cause of my insomnia. Again, thanks, i very much enjoyed.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-11-26 07:50 PM

I find closeness in all our distances.
As I tread the path with my fingertips
We are similar in our differences.

And I love you because of this...

A wonderful write. Enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-11-27 02:38 AM

romantic, yes

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2002-11-27 06:04 PM

i dont find closeness in the distance only
agony of the wait, dont you

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