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Heaven's Door
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Heaven's Door |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Be at peace, there is no crying, though the outer shell is dying and the inner self is lying at the cusp of heaven's door Be at peace your world is ending now you're done with all pretending and the time has come for sending all you are to heaven's door Be at peace, all of your sorrow or the promise of tomorrow has been shed and this day's borrow is returned to heaven's door Be at peace; cease endless striving leave the passion and the driving in the son's light you are thriving; Be at peace - time is no more Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (11-24-2002 07:15 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, this was good. I found it interesting that in the beginning the voice is directing the body/soul to be at peace... and then questions it in the end, when it is all over. Very effective. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sorry Sunshine, it's not that I meant a question mark in my last line, it's just that this forum, doesn't recognise my punctuation and I occasionally miss in the edit. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - from the heart, as always... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, A wonderful write, enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kethry, Great ideas; may we all have that much peace...wishing you every bit of it. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A very heartfelt thanks from one who just sent someone on. Well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I think this is beautiful. The peace I look for is in myself. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A moving write...very spiritual and comforting... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A beautifully tender write Kethry ... a wish for peace, though our hearts still yearn for what we have lost. Lovely rhythm and flow throughout, very much enjoyed your thoughts. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too wish this for everyone so much, for we are only wasting time and destroying ourselves with these unnecessary breakdowns! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I'm with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Keth, The view you share here is certainly well thought and full of positive thoughts. Enjoyed the read. ThisDiamond |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I think the theme follows quite well through..and I am now in that faze where I question further striving and driving as I once did
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful write Keth, enjoyed much. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kethry~ Very lovely thoughts, Be prepared to open heavens door when the time comes...Paul |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Be at peace --- you too... Liked the read... regards O Kethry, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ I read the heart of a friend in this lovely piece~  Love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Keth this is wonderful writing I do wish that I do go to heaven because it sounds beautiful. So are you, wonderful in what you say how you say it to. Very well written  love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 my dear Keth, this was a joy for my soul. You are such a clever writer. Now why don't you send me your muse for Christmas! TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, this is so beautiful. I really enjoyed it. I wish this peace for everyone. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey Kethry? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . It's still a great poem!  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Lynne I really enjoyed these heartfelt words from your talented pen. I hope all is well with you. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, thanks it has to be from the heart otherwise it does not scan. Sy, thanks so much. Tis a small offering no more regards2you, I do thank you. I think if I didn't know peace there would be pieces of me all over. kayjay, sending someone on in peace is one of the hardest things you can do. *HeaRTHuGS* SmartChick, thanks - and so you should, for that is the only place to find peace. scorpio, I don't know your face but I feel as if we have connected, thank you Kit, thank you for echoing my meaning and doing it so perfectly. Mistletoe Angel, I have lots of unnecessary breakdowns but I have learned to confine them to my car  This Diamond, thank you I enjoyed your comments ecrivan, and I am in the faze where nothing phases me, except for the driving and I let the road traffic authority worry about that  Gentle Spirit, thank you. I enjoyed your response Paul Wilson, Thank you I think, I worked my whole life at being good and you tell me I'm destined to be a doorman to heaven, not to even experience the joys, but to stand outside and watch while letting others in. Not fair! lol. Sudhir, Beloved one, the blessing of peace you bring are accepted with gratitude. Peace also to you. Marge, If I have the heart of a friend it's because you showed the way. *HuGGLeS* Vandana, thank you for the effort. Krissy, Ah yes but as your mother would say - "who would you know there?" Thanks lovey. Titia, I tried wrapping my muse to send, but it is such a slippery sucker, it keeps escaping and hiding under the bed. *HuGS* garysgirl, me too, except I don't wish for everyone to die. Thank you. Hey Sunshine? Thanks? Sue, I hope all is well with you, take care my friend and thank you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
glad I didn't miss this one! Great wording, Keth, and the style you used to present it is perfectly suited for the words. It has a melody to it... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
High praise indeed coming from the magic minstrel himself, Thanks Michael. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This soothing write could only bring peace! Well done my friend, take care! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on ~ Jackson Browne |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
"Common Aussie, Common" well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved one, I shall simply say this is wonderful and thank you for the peace within it. You know I love this don’t you, I shan’t be invited in, but I got to glimpse it so I shall strive to retain the memory. Excellent darling heart I’m left bereft of speech……….. Make the most of it beloved one  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
words straight from the heart.....splendid write as always Kethry ((hugs)) Charisma |
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