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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Capricious Petulance rides a colored horse Whimsically in quirky force Wanton in a vagrant way Never dull when in display. It blends into rainbows flair Forcefully it does declare Promising a treasure trove Denatured on a fired stove. Bagpipes play capricious sound Makes your head go round and round Dancing in a ne’er do well Weaving you into a spell. There where feeds the colored horse? Waiting for your act of course Your lasso flies about its neck You tighten it with what the heck. And there stands petulance in style And I have captured me a smile. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (11-23-2002 07:19 AM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
And with one light tug have drawn a pout to smile. Enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells Clever for so early in the morning. LOL Thank you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, you have such talent with words...images "that never dull when in display"... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wanton in a vagrant way Never dull when in display. =============================== Promising a treasure trove Denatured on a fired stove. =============================== Your lasso flies about its neck You tighten it with what the heck. =============================== Your poetry turns us all into Cheshire Cats...  we cant help but smile at your dragon's wile and your poetic style. Good morning me capricious Stinkylove  *winkiewinkie*    |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Petulance rides a colored horse (smiling) I loved this line Sy.... enjoyed the whole, but this one line caught me.. good stuff |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Sunshine's image! You quickly bring a smile to my face Sy! Enjoyed so very much this morning's read. ~Morning hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you scorpio. JM, Cheshire Cat aint bad and capricious can be nutritious, in a way. winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Cpat Hair Thanks for the good stuff. Sunshine My favourite cat. Enchantress Glad you enjoyed, hugs back. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"Petulance ~in style~" - the only way. Smiling here, this is an interesting poem. I like the line: "denatured on a fire stove", among too many others to quote. I enjoy the entire poem. Thanks and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Interesting, thanks for the comment. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) And I think poetry and the romance of life is meant to be ever so capricious, and it is never elusive either for we take a spoonful of all the colors we see around us and metabolize them into our alternate version of the rainbow on a palette from the heart! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Well that's a spoon full of color for me, thank you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno Sigh, I've had a whole passle full of "spoonful of colors"...but this is very good.....Someday I'm gonna cruise down yonder to Florida and meet up with you and the 'Roach'.....and just show yall a glorious time....Of course, you do know I'm the quiet, shy, passive kind of guy, but still I'm sure Bally will keep us awake don't ya think? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Thanks for the read and it would be great if you could wander down south for a look see.You and Mike and I could have some fun. By the way you inspired me one poem back, take a look, it's a fun read. It's called "The Pill of Why." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Bagpipes play capricious sound Makes your head go round and round Dancing in a ne’er do well Weaving you into a spell. Wow, Sy... I am dizzy... but this is such a gorgeous write  ~ hugs from a dizzy chipmunkLyra |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Their where feeds the colored horse? Waiting for your act of course Your lasso flies about its neck You tighten it with what the heck. With the many comments up above I join in laughter at this treasure trove. (In the first line, should their be "then" or "there"?? Nice job...KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, How are you my dear? And thank you for the read and dizzy. kayjay You are right, made the correction and thank you for the read and nice comment. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, your words always bring to one a smile. Always... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you barry and keep smiling. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart I have need of a smile this week it has been both eternally long and not good, so I’ll gather all the smiles I can get right now. Thank you for this one it is most welcome and as always your writing shines, thank you muchly for it. I’m wrapping my soul in some poetic splendour today to sort of lag myself against the weekend that hangs heavy with portents of trouble. Truly exquisite writing I love it utterly  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Thank you for taking the time to stop by. I hope things get better, stay well. Sy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is very sexy, i dont know why, but it is |
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