Open Poetry #23 |
One More Rainbow |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“ONE MORE RAINBOW” by Bill Charles ~~~~ If ever the morning mist caressed me, and the cool breeze kissed my face, the trees in the meadow would smile with the softness of dawn's grace… If ever the haze lifted with sun's rays, and the clouds filled the tranquil sky, the flowers would open to receive life to warm them, and they would sigh… If ever the rain spread out in harmony, and my thoughts were filled with you, I would see just one more rainbow, because of, because of what you do... ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may her smile forever light your world and bring kisses and sunshine to your heart always! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Bill, that was so wonderfull. I love all of your sweet poems Never be normal! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Bill, this is beautiful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep...I understand Bill...neat write... jwesley |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, This is pretty. I like the idea of flowers, sighing.....I also like the rest of the poem. Very, very nice. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Bill...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, this is another winner. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bill, this is lovely! Thank you! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill, you are growing more each poetic day. Your change in style is very nice.. Enjoy!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nicely done...wishes to you for the gold at the end of the rainbow. ThisDiamond |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed this verse very much Bill... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...There is such a beauty, a presence in your words. They always speak to the deep in my heart and my soul. I love this exquisite poem. What wealth of longing lingers... silently in the the very core of your being, in your heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bill....so very beautiful. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Very lovely and enjoyed. [This message has been edited by sigheyes (11-25-2002 09:54 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Simply dreamy Bill. Loved this! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You speak of love in a manner that is uniquely your own--and I am swept away with the natural beauty of your images... EA |
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