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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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falls empty branches extend in the sky, covered in raindrops their leaves floating by, season by season taking shape on the tree, resembling this lifetime encircling me, yielding concurrently come and go disappear, slip away as its happening even memories unclear, swept away by the wind kiss of life from the sun, forever's a dream while the wheel's being spun |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A definite fall feeling to this, with the hint of winter. Welcome to Passions! |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Nice! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And memories never truly fleet, for the brances will bud again in the death of winter to the birth of spring! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very well-written poem with lots of colorful images described. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. I enjoyed it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Marie, this is stark in it's chill. but, a sparse beauty Ed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i guess the beauty lies in the infinite possibilities waiting to be filled in - in the empty chill - well something like that |
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