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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-11-23 10:49 AM

Awakening you
a feather’s touch upon a curve,
mayhaps a kiss ever light..
Or just to savor the beauty
of your rest..

Listening...
To each gentle breath of breathe
as a lid flutters in dream flight.
Upon the arch of silken spine or
the curve of tremble’s thigh.

As shadows trace the wall in dance
of silhouetted form. A midnight’s call
will then perchance be more than just,
than just the shiver’s norm...

This moan that comes to my lips
as eyes do trace the form in lace.
Of gentle swells and fragrance light..
Of silk and lace in lie one’s face.

Yet now, as light does cast the glow
of blush upon the cheeks...
I sit in awe, this treasure shown.
As hours become the night of day...
when again... in dreams she speaks....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-23 10:52 AM

wonderful...
beauty in your words and the thoughts... I enjoyed a great deal

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-11-23 11:32 AM

Oh, my...... so lovely, to say the least.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-11-23 11:35 AM

I want that!

Oh, (heavy sigh) to be on the receiving end would be absolutely dreamy!

Great write!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-11-23 01:24 PM

Barry, I sigh as I read this one.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-11-23 01:59 PM

Barry, now you just know..
there are huge *Sighs*
coming out of Canada!!
Wonderful write..much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-11-23 06:06 PM

oh yeah, definately awake now *whew*

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-11-23 07:24 PM

It is rare when a reader can physically feel the intense emotions and the touch of a work of art. So be it. ThisDiamond

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