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The Other Sun
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The Other Sun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Other Sun My eyes are shut yet see the sun. A valley full of emerald green A golden field of flowers spun. A ballet full of joyous scene And here I lay me down to sleep. To make a hammock of a web To dream my dreams of phantoms reap. And wait the silver moon to ebb. It is my choice of nightly splore. A place I go of rainbows bend. My thing of wile that I adore That serves me pleasure in its wend. There is no harm in dreams of sweet. A piece of candy spun at night. There is no harm in dreaming treat. A bit of love to make it right Each night I go to heavens door. Someday I’ll stay forevermore. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May you be blessed by many warm suns, Sy... today, and every day.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, you do know just the right words...I learn something every time you write.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you for the read and nice reply. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And here I lay me down to sleep. To make a hammock of a web To dream my dreams of phantoms reap. And wait the silver moon to ebb. It is my choice of nightly splore. A place I go of rainbows bend. My thing of wile that I adore That serves me pleasure in its wend. There is no harm in dreams of sweet. A piece of candy spun at night. There is no harm in dreaming treat. A bit of love to make it right ======================================= To make a hammock of a web A place I go of rainbows bend. A piece of candy spun at night. and those will be my way cool lines for the day... a "web hammock" .. OH I do so love the way your mind works...have I mentioned that before? *L*  And Randy's dreaming of candy... very cool write of images and rhymes Sy-babes.. your poetry is our daily dose of sun (and winkies) LOL *ww*   I'm not crazy, I'm just a little unwell |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you are my daily dose of sun and fun. And Randy is wrapping a box of dream candy for you. WWRS  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
What a wonderful place to go. I especially like: "make a hammock of a web" ...and you do know the right words and I, too, never fail to learn something new with every poem you write. They are treasures. Thanking you, warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, A lovely warm reply, thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy...here I am! Better late than never! Wonderful morning um...afternoon read. ~Late hugs!~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress lATE HUGS BACK, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
There is no harm in dreams of sweet. A piece of candy spun at night. There is no harm in dreaming treat. A bit of love to make it right I'd have to agree! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I could see the places that you see Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Thanks for the agree. passing shadows Have a sweet before you go to sleep. LOL thank you. |
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