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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-11-22 11:14 PM


Whirling thoughts
On a tapestry
Of exquisite words
Painted together
In a masterpiece
Of historic revelations

Intense meanings
Deep psychologically
Profound statements
In crystal clear
Reflective perfections
Mirrored within history

Winds carrying ghosts
Messages echoed in
Monumental viewpoints
Standing monuments
Shifting through time

Images so deep
That the cracks
Where they lie
Have definitions
Of interpretations
In ever changing
Generations
Of connoisseurs

Ultimate complement
In a crown jewel
Arranged brilliance
Sparking within
It own light
To warm
Humanities soul

Thought: May your thoughts rise out of the ashes of burnt time to be reclaimed on a pedestal of continuous reflections.

D.Lester Young 11/22/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
1 posted 2002-11-23 06:18 PM



What is not to love about this poem?

Thanks for sharing it with us.


Warm Regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

majnu
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since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088
SF Bay Area
2 posted 2002-11-23 07:00 PM


an interesting string of thoughts.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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