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majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2002-11-21 12:44 PM

lament for the summer

the stars seem to pulse
language waves out across space
young moon hides her face

flames from afar place
electromagnetic lace
optical impulse

child's glitter strewn wide
atmospheric curvature
a wind of light comes

specks flee adventure
morning song no longer hide
air itself is numb

winter morn's pale grace
cold over cosmic divide
blue orb spinning slow

fading world's lights low
gaia yearns for summer's warmth
blanketed by snow.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

[This message has been edited by majnu (11-21-2002 12:45 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-11-21 01:05 PM

majnu
Bright palette, enjoyed the write.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-11-21 04:37 PM

http://www.gaia.no/

Sail well, Gaia...

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2002-11-21 05:28 PM

thank you both for the read.

sunshine that is such a cool sight, thank for the heads up.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-11-21 07:02 PM

My favorite poem of yours yet, majnu.
I like the glow. And the ice.

Mike

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-11-21 07:58 PM

blue orb spins slow,
yep, a long way to go from nov. to april,

but makes for good poetry, doesnt it?
thanks for this one

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2002-11-21 07:59 PM

I agree with the squirrel. This is my favorite yet

Never be normal!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

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7 posted 2002-11-22 08:28 AM

lo0ve this one... the ending...superb

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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8 posted 2002-11-22 04:30 PM

a very cool collage of haiku's
wonderful imagery and vocabulary
well done poet majnu

I'm not crazy, I'm just a little unwell
I know right now you cant tell
but stay awhile, maybe then you'll see
a different side of me

MB20

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

9 posted 2002-11-23 06:51 PM

thanks all for reading my work.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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