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At First Glance
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At First Glance |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
Peering at her form the side, wondering will she ever see me, waiting for my heart to be uncaged so it can flow so free. So that her Light awakaning smile will contine to shine, Lighting my dark path so I will open up, and make her mine. Wishing one day she will be warm in my arms, one day soon, so that youre love can intertwine, so happy in our Armed cacoon. The Eye candy of most when she preforms in her dance class, With no feelings, just stuck up pure beauty, at first glance. But ive seen past her shell, to Reveal her inner core, these past few months she's seemed more perfect then ever before. But still a barrier between me and my loveley princess, The shy barrier the controls my actions has subdued no less. Blinded by her Looks, and yet in awe of her personality, A smile for the boy beside, but never Smile for me. podering will she ever Take a peek, or will i have to move in advance, She seems not to belive im even standing there, at first glance. Soon she will know my inner feelings, the few locked inside, She will know that in my poems, my heart and my words collide. I know yet even then, The chances of me seeing victory is Slim, but if my Heart is true, maybe our jorney of bliss can begin. So that i can stop sheading my heart, pain dripping frim this pen, So i can stop tear soaking my sheet, while i scribble words every now and then. With poetry in my heart, and a poem in her grip, maybe she can give me a chance, So that maybe our eyes can finally meet, when we both take our Quick Glance. The man of few words... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What an ache I feel from this poem. I hope she will come to her senses and see how wonderful you are. But, keep in mind that sometimes, getting what we think we want is extremely disappointing in the end. She will never be perfect. Just believe... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Maybe...fabulous writing...James |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Nice poem! BTW The sooner you make your move the less time you will lose admiring someone who might just be something other than what she seems. Been there done that. : } |
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