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Three Little Bears
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since 2002-10-23
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0 posted 2002-11-21 04:25 PM



Maples bleed sweetness
into metal pails-
drip, clank, drop.
The lake's iron stain
hatches out of winter.

Chimes chant in
a sharp-tooth wind.
Shedding of snow
bares anemic fields,
rainbows of grey and brown.

It's the season when
unmittened fingers
wont be frostbitten,
and tears don't freeze
on exposed cheeks.



© Copyright 2002 Andrea Defoe - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 2002-11-21 05:53 PM


Hi 3 little bears - are you the same 3 little bears as in TCP? If so, hello!

Enjoyed this.

Cor

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2002-11-21 06:06 PM


enjoyed..the brevity is refreshing.

Three Little Bears
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3 posted 2002-11-21 06:39 PM


Core,
Yes, I'm the same. It's good to see someone familiar here.

~Andrea~


Three Little Bears
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4 posted 2002-11-21 06:41 PM


Cpat Hair,
Thank you.
~Andrea~

Three Little Bears
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5 posted 2002-11-21 06:42 PM


Oops,
No edit button here, LOL.
Core, Thank you, btw.

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6 posted 2002-11-21 11:17 PM




(smiles) Oh Andrea, I just love this, sweet friend, I could almost taste the maple syrup at the tip of my tongue reading this, spring is my favorite time of year though I love them all! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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