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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-11-21 07:20 PM




If you could read my mind
you’d know
I love the way you stare
green pools
drawing me in
to your truth.
No summer blooms
or Autumn moon
or wintry mountain peak
can top
this burst of love
that’s springing in my heart


BloomingRose


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1 posted 2002-11-21 07:46 PM


...Beautiful...

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-11-21 09:01 PM


This is so beautiful.
Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-11-21 09:03 PM


beautiful...............
angsana
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4 posted 2002-11-21 09:43 PM


Lovely!!
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-11-21 10:54 PM




(smiles) Oh Debra, I'm so happy for you, sweet friend, I wish this true happiness to always fill your heart, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, this is soooooo romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-11-21 11:12 PM


Deb, nothing can top that feeling of love in
our hearts, can it?
Thanks for sharing your feelings with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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