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Alabaster skin............(Senryu)
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Alabaster skin............(Senryu) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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~*~ Alabaster skin, Face delicately defined ~ Dresden doll divine. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-21-2002 09:46 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, I loved it. You do these so well and say so much in just a few words. (Maybe one day I'll learn what the difference is between these nice little Japanese verses...I thought my little series was haiku's, but after the comments, I changed the titles to "Japanese Verses", like you called them. I figured that would work.....) "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-21-2002 08:39 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Well done, good read. |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
Blushing cheeks on fire Bluest eyes match silk of dress Dresden lady, smile |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Linda: That's pretty, pretty...(said smiling) You don't run out of ideas, do you? Love this one. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Applause! ThisDiamond |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ I have been enjoying your "short Japanese verses"! tehe --very much, I might add! (Just a little reminder, haikus are STRICTLY on nature, although senryus may have some references to nature as well.) Good morning hugs to you! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ I am pleased you enjoyed my little itty- bitty, teeny-weeny, tiny piece of poetry! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sybil ~ "Bluest eyes match silk of dress"---I absolutely love that line! Perfect! Thank you! Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat ~ I literally have a passion for writing these. I recently wrote 33 of them in one afternoon! It was as if the floodgates of creativity opened up and I channelled them all! hehe ---if only it was always that easy! ~ may your day be a good one! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ThisDiamond ~ "Applause"---Thank you! Thank you! One and all. I would like to thank.... tehe Curtain drops. Earth Angel exits with a big smile on her face! EA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You do these so well. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Like pure white chocolate Her smile melts my hearts candle Making of Midas  (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Linda, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, God Bless You, this is a gorgeous poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely....perfectly lovely! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
  SUPERB! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Earth Angel! Cor |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue ~ I appreciate you saying so!--and I have noticed that you yourself have been delving into the waters of short Japanese poems and doing a wonderful job at writing them! Thank you! ~ Here's to both of us stretching our poetic wings! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Oh, no! You mentioned the "C"-word (chocolate) in your deliciously sweet senryu! Sunshine and VAS really had me going there for awhile with their "C"-word poems. I love white chocolate, milk chocolate, dark chocolate--even sugar-free Baker's chocolate! Darnation, here I go again, craving some of the "C"-word and all I have is protein power drink in that delicious flavor. As I have done before, I'm heading to the kitchen to get a "C" fix--albeit no where near as satisfying as a box of the real stuff! tehe ~ May your dreams always be as sweet as you are! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchantress ~ That was a "lovely" reply! Thank you! ********************************************* VAS ~ Does that mean you liked it?!? tehe THANK YOU! ********************************************* Corinne ~ I appreciate you reading and replying! "Lovely" is such a lovely word! ********************************************* ~ May your lives be as picture perfect as a Dresden doll Linda |
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