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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-11-20 10:36 PM

the moon is forlorn
almost lost in the sky
watching the sun collapse
in the spectacle up high
the continuous circle
day yields to the night
waiting for centerstage
the black brings its light
empty of color
yet casting its spell
bringer of dreams
from loves infinite well

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-11-20 11:09 PM

Liked this very much. The mood and texture of this reminds me of.....someone.

Thanks, Inked one

~wranx

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2002-11-20 11:14 PM

nice flow

the moon inspires

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-20 11:15 PM

Oh yes, inkedgoddess, the moon certainly does "cast spells" and "brings dreams". Thank you for sharing your poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2002-11-21 07:00 AM

"waiting for centerstage,
the black brings its light." loved this.
Gemma xxxxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

5 posted 2002-11-21 07:49 AM

mmmmmmm--love the moon, and your words!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-11-21 08:13 AM

inkedgoddess
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2002-11-21 08:19 AM

"the black brings it's light"

Nice line. I like the entire poem a great deal.

Warm Regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

8 posted 2002-11-21 10:33 AM

Very nice write enjoyed the topic
I am a fan of the moon
and all writes dedicated to it
Thomas

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2002-11-21 10:52 AM

I too watched the come 'n go
of two spectacles last night...

minute comes to mind....

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