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Open Poetry #23

Breathless (15 or less)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-20 02:10 PM

Breathless

he left me
breathless
when the words
spoken of love

said

tomorrow

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-11-20 02:22 PM

Turn the page...
to look into
tomorrow...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-11-20 02:29 PM

Ooooh the anticipation here Helen...
Wonderfully said.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2002-11-21 09:46 AM

And she made me smile with each second she held her breath with an·tic·i·pa·tion

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-21 09:50 AM

Helen, I love these short ones....you say so much
in so few words. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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