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moonflower
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 37
magical land of make-believe

0 posted 2002-11-20 11:37 AM

Dance of Life

Life is a dance
on a magic stage.
We choose the steps
and how the music plays.
Sometimes we dance too fast
so we miss the beat,
other times so slow,that
life goes by while we sleep.
The stage is always changing,
but the dance goes ever on-a
magical timeless circle..
lifes ageless dance marathon..

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-11-20 11:39 AM

How true!--and you said it so well. This is a lovely little poem that conveys so much!
A delight to read!

Earth Angel

moonflower
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 37
magical land of make-believe

2 posted 2002-11-20 11:43 AM

thanks earth angel..im so glad you liked it..

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-20 11:43 AM

(smiles) Oh Valarie, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and as long as you follow your heart and believe in your dreams the dance will always be lively and upbeat and let yourself tango with your blessings and glissade with your destiny! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Valarie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-11-20 11:47 AM

Exceptional grace and truth in a neat little package.
ThisDiamond

moonflower
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 37
magical land of make-believe

5 posted 2002-11-20 06:23 PM

thanks mistletoe and diamond..your kind words mean a lot..im so glad you liked it...

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2002-11-20 09:24 PM

Beautiful poem moonflower and if life truly is a dance let's hope its not the funky chicken.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-11-20 10:15 PM

Valerie, this is a very nice write indeed. I enjoyed this to-night. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-11-21 10:14 AM

Valerie, this is very good. I'm giving it a bump so
maybe more people will see it.
Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

moonflower
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 37
magical land of make-believe

9 posted 2002-11-21 11:06 AM

aenimal..thanks for reading and posting to my poem..and i agree.. no funky chicken..lol..im glad you liked !..

nightshade..im so glad you liked my poem..thanks for the sweet words..

garysgirl..thank you so much for saying you think my poem is good..and for the bump!..that was so nice of you to do that..thanks again!..

..

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

[This message has been edited by moonflower (11-21-2002 11:11 AM).]

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