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The Aldis Lamp
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The Aldis Lamp |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Aldis Lamp Night, and a beach at peace with long, low surf whose signal warmth desires towards. From down the coast a ship blinks, secreting into the black a string of pearls. RMW [This message has been edited by RMW (11-20-2002 04:52 PM).] |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
Flashing dots and dashes morse code for the eyes a wandering mind allows its prances but by history's light it dies... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice...enjoyed this ever so much. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sybill....smiling.....how do you folks do that....compose on the spot I mean? Thank you for taking a moment to read....and write. Bob |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting piece Bob. You brevity and honing of word has left it sparse yet creates a scene one can with little imagination see in the minds eye... you always amaze me.... Breakers washed evenings beach with reflections of the passing blinks as shutters stuttered on downside passage |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Enchantress....thank you for ...the "very, very". Bob Ron....Ship to shore. Smiling. Thank you. Bob |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bob, this does create images in the minds eye. I enjoyed it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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