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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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weakening, a myst in the fade, to reign no more "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enduring stone erodes slowly foundations last |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
i wish to be the wind inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enduring stone erodes slowly foundations last ~~*~~ short-lived crumblings deteriorating foundations [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-20-2002 01:01 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
i wish to be the wind and generate strength |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Know myself... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling).... Even faded impressions remain beauty |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Know myself... I Am...  |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
All.  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
(chuckling).... Even faded impressions remain beauty (~smiling~) subdued and pressure marked: stunner |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
All Whole |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
.. (haa) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
. Check mate.  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
( ) dotless uhuh..I figured this one out ahead of time you just can't see what is between the parenthesis M |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I concede... you win.  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"(" Existentialist contemplation of the sound of one driven by the nothing inside |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ok you guys... you crack me up and I don't think Kit has made a smilie for that so I will just  to you M |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
nakedthoughts..i apologise for ruining your game..i didnt know it was a game..i feel really dumb and stupid..i thought it meant write a poem with 10 words or less..im really sorry i messed it up...next time ill watch a while and see the way its played before jumping in...sorry  inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you didn't ruin it at all..it didn't start out as a game..these guys sometimes just are so bored at work they decide to play "who can outdo one another" I added to yours and if you want to you can take that one and add another less then 10 to it and I will be glad to do a few with you or maybe someone else will join in.I liked yours very much...after awhile you will get use to certain poets who enjoy using their talents (not I, I just try to keep up with them)and are very playful on here. hugssssss M oh...and sometimes the ten or less just means we wrote a poem containing that amount of words..Blame it on Mark Sheldon, I believe he started this craze  [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-20-2002 06:39 PM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
(That's: Mark V Sheldon... )-MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are just lucky I spelled Sheldon correctly, I hadn't at first ... is there another Mark Sheldon? that you have to use the V |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Indeed there is... He's a dj on a local classical station (I'm flattered, but pleasantly resentful... ).-MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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