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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-11-20 01:33 PM



Look at me,
Stare,
You'll find i don't mind,
Forget what i'm saying,
You already have,
Repeat yourself later,
To my thickened skin,
Nobody listens,
To spiralling hate,
Think yourself powerful,
Increasingly weak,
Translucently fragile,
You find a challenge in me,
Beauty around you thrives,
On its testimony to survive,
Over maelevolent obstacles,
Like you.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Radrook
Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

1 posted 2002-11-20 01:41 PM


Very deep!
Well-written poem!
God bless!

[This message has been edited by Radrook (11-20-2002 01:42 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-11-20 01:43 PM


I wish I could get my skin to thicken..any secrets?

M

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