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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2002-11-21 10:39 AM



a misty fog
paints a serenity
to the morning
like a halo
about
the
earth

and
we watch
from within our hearts
with a peace
that passes
all understanding

as if
a sea of hope
whispers
of love and calm,
of tenderness
and harmony

tranquility
profound


©November 21, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2002-11-21 11:02 AM



Virginia
look deep
for this deserves
a title

Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
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2 posted 2002-11-21 11:07 AM


yes I agree it does deserve a title.

nicely done V.

moonflower
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since 2002-11-17
Posts 37
magical land of make-believe
3 posted 2002-11-21 11:18 AM


this is beautiful..like a soft whisper in the misty morning..liked it very much...

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

4 posted 2002-11-21 11:19 AM


Virginia...soft and special. Bob
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