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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-11-19 10:19 AM

Tucked away,
the tragedy of the years gone by
the tattered me
wanting just another day
without living my memories in you
to erase those that once made me smile
but must have been a farce.

My eyes are calling for you
the tall of you to lean against
to look up to,
wanting just one kiss
to know my lips still feel.

Is that too much to ask,
does it have to be spoken?

Once upon a time
I was in control, a dream catcher
arresting the tiny bubbles of my reality,
turning them into fantasies of you.
Then one day my webbing shrunk
in the storm and I squeezed you out
for one last dream,
the one that "never will".

Today is a tuck away day,
not knowing what I am missing.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-19 10:42 AM

some days are that...

hugs to you my friend...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-11-19 10:45 AM

Thanks C, I am ok I'll take the hugs even though I don't need them..I was word tucking today...seeing where this depressantless medicine would take me when taking it late when awake...*S

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-11-19 10:47 AM

well perhaps you don't need hugs for no reason.... every once in a while I do.

glad to hear you are OK

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-11-19 10:49 AM

awwwwwwwwww..well these virtual ones are hard to feel

but I will give you a few

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-11-19 11:03 AM

AAAAAWWWW, Maureen....I love your poetry, as I always do, but I also I also love those hugs.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-11-19 12:05 PM

I love the concepts of a tuck away day...
It doesn't matter if the sun is bright or dim...it always shines here. ThisDiamond

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-11-19 12:49 PM

WynterLady~

'My eyes are calling for you
the tall of you to lean against
to look up to'

I like the all of it ... but this speaks to me gently~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-11-19 12:53 PM

I have many "tuck away days" also Maureen, but you described them brilliantly

~ loving rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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