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Investing
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Investing I feel so artificial, my naturalness held back. Between this time and memory my dreams are carved in black, never ending timelessness, my space prepared for such. I concentrate on shadows deep aware of untamed touch. Behind the shades my thoughts appear in abstract silhouette. I work my way through cornered moods that leave me in a sweat. Fashioned by a paradox, san clothing in detail, I bathe in you to take me there and cover me in braille. Unspoken words collect in mind, are filed away 'til then when "must" becomes my destiny unsayable again. I feel the texture of each write and meditate on such. I concentrate on shadows deep aware of untamed touch. I sound you out, my words of day to hear the rhythms tone. I gain the pleasure, volume soft while being all alone. I tape myself distinct in tune to rescue thoughts astray, and piece by piece, in language found, invest in "come what may". M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~M~ I like this one too, almost like an extention of Wistful Thinking... I have a sneaking suspicion your next poem just might be along the lines of ~must~ becoming a reality (?) ...said lightly and smiling here... So enjoy this, for I can relate..... You make it seem so easy to reach right into the depths and just write. The talent you have! I am impressed and so glad you share it with us... Thank You, Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Flawless syllables flowed like wine, an elegant muse now etched in time!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Pat, thank you..I hadn't thought of these as a trilogy...I just write when the mood suits me. And I really don't have a muse as such, in fact I never understood the word until coming to passions. I have my inspirations and at any one time they may be of one or many persons, places or things. Thank you for the rhyming response ES M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And this must have been a great inspiration, Maureen, because you turned it into a beauty of a poem  ~ loving rodent hugsLyra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Quite a write...James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I always love to read your "inspirations" and thoughts. You write of them so well. You have such talent, Lady. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-19-2002 03:18 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
come what may, yes, I believe in that! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you James *s Ethel, don't know about that talent thing, but I enjoy writing of late. Thank you hugs M Dixie, me too  I've learned an awful lot in the past 2 years...and the most important thing is you can't count on anything or anyone except for yourself.M |
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