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Swinging on the Moon
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Swinging on the Moon |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Swinging on the Moon By Larry Chadwick Inspired by a long ago night with Nancy Lee. Our love intoxicated me, It kept us up that night. Spending time with you, Until tomorrow’s daylight. Looking into your tantalizing eyes, Filtered by the bright full moon. Time became irrelevant, I could have stayed until noon. Just the sound of your voice, Made lullabies of your words. Snuggled up so tight, Even your thoughts I heard. All of it foreplay to a kiss, Seduced by the very thought of you. Drunk at the idea of our future, Sobered by a reality so new. November 18, 2002 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (11-19-2002 01:02 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I know this feeling, Larry... and it is a very special one... I love the poem and the way you put the repitition into it for emphasis... I hope all is well with you  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lyra, Well, thank you. But I had no idea! LOL Cleaned it up though.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Larry...Enjoyed very much. Glad to see you have returned to work. Best wishes to you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And I thought that repitition was there for a reason, Larry... That shows how much I know  ~ hugs from a dumb chipmunkLyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lyra, Sorry but dumb was on this end. So we're better matched for friends than you knew!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Larry, repetition of this kind of Love is OK. Larry, repetition of this kind of Love is OK. Larry, repet.....  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Larry, I didn't see it until you "cleaned it up", as you said. But, I feel like Kacy said above, this kind of love poem COULD be repeated "Love makes the world go around" |
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