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There's A Man I Must Pursue
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There's A Man I Must Pursue |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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I'm sending all my love Far out across the sea In the hope a certain man Will make his way back to me Will he be dark and handsome Or fair and rather shy Will my heart skip a beat When I look him in the eye Will he ride a big white steed And simply sweep me off my feet Or will he sing me songs of love With a voice so soft and sweet Will his kiss be filled with passion As he takes me in his arms Will I be able to resist His masculine charms I could sit and dream forever On this picture perfect day But there's a man I must pursue I musn't let him get away * * * * I wrote this just for a bit of fun as I allowed my imagination to run free.I'm still happily married and I'm not on the prowl, just in case you wondered! I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I didn't wonder, I knew what you were doing. And you did it very well...thanx SueT |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - you have found him, he is right beside you... BC |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, sometimes a little imaginative adventure makes for a great night of love! Huggles and praise on this one, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue! And hey...we can always dream  ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I knew you were just playing, too. It was very good, though. Thanks for the explanation, because someone may have embarrased themselves with their comments. I've done that lots of times on here. "Love makes the world go around" |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
i enjoyed this..it felt like a whimsical little flight of fancy while i was reading it..kind of like a sing-song rhythym..i really liked it alot..  inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh Sue, I know this feeling ever so well, as for me, I truly am on the prowl for my Joanna and to hold her hand for the first time and have her forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
At least it was a pleasant dream, Sue... Very nicely written  hugs and grinsLyra |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Suetang~ A lovely piece of make believe. I was once told by another here at PIP that you & I need to put warning labels on some of our poems, so I'm glad you did just that. The mind may wander but the heart will always remain true. The man in your heart will always be Andrew Paul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
Beautiful poem... thanks for sharing |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Beautifully written Sue, you must have a full moon to gaze upon also down under. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Go for it, sister-friend! Cor |
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