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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2002-11-21 07:31 PM




his voice
lifts
above
the echoing
chimes
as
winds
pass by,
rises
through
the stacks
of fresh
colored leaves
scattered
as i run
through them,
becons
between
the falling
raindrops
that slide
down
into
and become
the ocean
between
us,
where he
waits
for his seamistress
where ocean
and sky meet,
where we meet,
without
boundaries
for some
stolen moments
between
midnight
and morning




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scorpio
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1 posted 2002-11-21 08:08 PM


Stolen moments between midnight and morning...very romantic...very well written..

...believe what your heart feels...

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-11-21 08:13 PM


This was a very romantic poem and I especially liked the ending, too. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-11-21 08:18 PM



Very nice...!

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-11-21 08:21 PM


Very romantic indeed. ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-11-21 11:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such romance fills your words, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) May true happiness always fill your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vlraynes
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6 posted 2002-11-21 11:12 PM



inkedgoddess~
Lovely and romantic thoughts you've penned here.
I enjoyed this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

wranx
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7 posted 2002-11-21 11:28 PM


This is Damn fine, Inky

Glad you found this little(?)forum.


~wranx

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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8 posted 2002-11-22 02:26 PM


thanks, im trying to find my way around here,
its a lot to navigate through at once.....

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