Open Poetry #23 |
the voice |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
his voice lifts above the echoing chimes as winds pass by, rises through the stacks of fresh colored leaves scattered as i run through them, becons between the falling raindrops that slide down into and become the ocean between us, where he waits for his seamistress where ocean and sky meet, where we meet, without boundaries for some stolen moments between midnight and morning |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Stolen moments between midnight and morning...very romantic...very well written.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This was a very romantic poem and I especially liked the ending, too. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very nice...! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very romantic indeed. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such romance fills your words, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) May true happiness always fill your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
inkedgoddess~ Lovely and romantic thoughts you've penned here. I enjoyed this. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is Damn fine, Inky Glad you found this little(?)forum. ~wranx "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks, im trying to find my way around here, its a lot to navigate through at once..... |
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