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Night Succumbs (repost) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Night succumbs to days embrace winds song becomes just a trace And in this quiet I think of you Lavender blue tears from my eyes sweet longing are my lonely sighs And with these tears I cry for you The breeze sweeps across my face as night succumbs to days embrace And in this quiet I need you |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
softly spoken well yuh yuh |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon~ This is beautiful, my friend. I truly felt this one...every word. Hugs to you,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, in the "quiet" of the night, without the distractions of the day, our thoughts and feelings seem more intensified and effect us on a much deeper level. I felt the longing and the lonliness of your words. Very vivid writing. EA |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
doh... i don't think i've seen this one before... glad i caught it now. it rhymes, but is so unforced that one only notices the whispering. beautifully executed ending Sharon... you sure can nail them sometimes.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this is very good. Had a lonesome feel about it...the way I am for my Gary..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all..this is one of my personal favorites.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well...you know ya did good when Chris digs the rhyme  lovely phrasing and vocabulary Sharon... I can see why this would be a fave. No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
and also lovely is alive thankfuly, Kindly, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, I know this feeling of yearning ever so much, sweet friend, I think of my Joanna much of the day and all night and I fall alseep crying for her! (sigh) This is well-expressed, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sharon, thanx for the re-post.... A very ethereal write.....such a light touch to it...nicely done.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for re-posting this one, PDV... I missed it the first time around and I'm glad I caught it this time... Its very beautiful  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The wind answers? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
past the threshold of nighttime, the dreamlover arrives again, longing ending now... till morning at least we can dream, cant we? |
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