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She Whispered
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She Whispered |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*She Whispered...*~ "Listen"... And she tiptoed Into the quiet night "Shhhhh"... "Let the inspiration speak... Let it find you" And I listened... As voices spoke In sweet inspire Of remember And I heard... While ink flowed onto tear-stained parchment She whispered, "Listen"... And left me to my hearing ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-18-2002 05:12 PM).] |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
Ah girl, you heard the accent then, of a muse, and she sits you very well... don't forget to share her often... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dearest Vicky, You always make my eyes shine, my cheeks glow and my mouth smiling with your exceptional poetry  It's so good to see you come in more often sweet friend. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and you in turn whispered to me--and I listened..... Superbly done! Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vlraynes - excellent write, I read, and then I listened and heard... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and she inspired a delicate write in your pen as well... lovely poetess Vicky-girl...thy muse is stiring  keep listeing to the whispers..we reap the benefits  No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Listen for she whispers softly... Beautiful write Vicky! Love this and the presentation! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Listening intently...often the muse's inspiration is softly subtle...easy to miss...but once heard her message is clear... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Vicky - a lovely write - enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Vicky~ A wonderful write. Listen and we will learn more from the silence of our hearts than we could ever imagine...Paul |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Vicky, this is just amazing. I love poems that whisper gently to me and this one certainly did. Great writing. Huggles, Marti |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Vicky, Thanks for the reminder to get quiet and listen. A beautiful thought--beautifully written! Shenachie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, yay, I heard the whispers reading this too, yay!!! (kiss on cheek) Your beautiful words are ones we can always listen to, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
listening softly, Vicky... A beautiful write  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (11-18-2002 11:07 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow... Vicky... wow I am a Knight who says Ni! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Just softly stunning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i can hear this one as i read..like a little angel whispering in my ear...to listen...wow...what things can be heard.... very neat my friend.. lv,g "dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown [This message has been edited by dgvarner (11-20-2002 11:54 PM).] |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
just what i needed to hear tonight. thank you. /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, I'm so glad that you listened and heard the whisper. And shared it with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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