Open Poetry #23 |
Love Is Like A Fragile Plant |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When couples are together and see each other every day Often get used to the other, not taking time to play They get so very busy in their every day lives And forget the importance of pleasing husbands and wives When they first met, each was the other's priority Forgetting about this happens to a large majority When doing this they are taking each other for granted not using time to cultivate the love that was planted Love is like a fragile plant for it to last and grow It has to be nurtured and strong roots it will show Never forgetting to let each other know the love you feel Not keeping it inside let the other know it's real So even though we get lonesome with between us all these miles Let's help our love to grow, in spite of our troubles and trials Putting the other first, so important should be If contented I'll make you, then the same you'll make me Our love will continue to grow, and this will change, not ever Of this I'm completely sure, we will survive life's stormy weather Absence makes the heart grow fonder, I've heard the years through, But this I think depends on, how strong the love betwen the two So, if away from each other, and we have to be apart Let us tenderly take care of the love planted in our hearts |
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© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved | |||
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ethel Your words spoke volumes and I think we all need to be reminded not to take each other for granted. Thank you. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Sue, for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. I appreciate such a talent as yourself reading my poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
So, if away from each other, and we have to be apart Let us tenderly take care of the love planted in our hearts All too true! I really liked your poem. Well done! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Munda, thanks very much for reading my poem. I apprciate your reply, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love is like a fragile plant for it to last and grow It has to be nurtured and strong roots it will show Never forgetting to let each other know the love you feel Not keeping it inside let the other know it's real So even though we get lonesome with between us all these miles Let's help our love to grow, in spite of our troubles and trials Putting the other first, so important should be If contented I'll make you, then the same you'll make me =============================== and your poem blooms with wisdom in its rhymes... a wonderful write of the truth in holding on to what matters most...we do get caught up in the day to day and forget. well done Poetess No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - love is like a fragile plant, needs to be nourished and taken care of, as it's very delicate. I know that you will be fine with yours... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How true is this Ethel??!! Very wise words from you today!! ~Mega hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... Let us tenderly take care of the love planted in our hearts ...' Ethel, your poem speaks volumes. My Hon and I have been married almost 34 years and we still love each other as much as the day we married and enjoy being together. Playing is the key. Huggles, Marti |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Janet Marie, I really appreciate you reading my poem and for your reply, too. I love your poetry, sweet lady. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, thank you for reading and replying to my poem. Yes, I hope that Gary and I will always remember how precious and fragile our love really is. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, thank you very much. The words said from such a wise lady made me feel good. I appreciate you reading my poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, thanks for reading and replying. I'm glad that you and your "Hon" get along so well after so many years. I've learned from mistakes through the years, and so has Gary. So, hopefully we can make our lives together more happy than with our other marriages. Yes, I think "playing" is the key, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandanna, thank you very much for reading my poem and for your reply. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a truly beautiful poem with lots of truths in it, Ethel... Love should never be taken for granted ~ hugs and grins Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so wisely said, sweet friend, I want to make my love Joanna the most happiest girl she can be and I want to be hers and never want to make her feel doubted or unspecial one moment as I always want to make her shine like a palm tree on a sunny day! (kiss on cheek) May you and Gary's love only grow brighter forever, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ethel~ These are words to live by, so often we take our mates for granted, only to relize how much we love them after they are gone. As I say " Love me while I am here don't wish you would have after I am gone"...Paul |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lyra, thanks so much for reading and replying to my poem. I hope that Gary and I never take each other for granted. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you so much for reading and replying to my poem. I know that you will be very good to your Joanna and cherish your love so that it will grow. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Paul, Thank you very much for reading and replying to my poem. Those are very wise words you said. Thank you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hi garysgirl - a good reminder of priorities and not to take advantage of one another. Thanks for this, Cor |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Let us tenderly take care of the love planted in our hearts ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A very gentle loving poem. Enjoyed! Deb |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Corrine, thank you for reading my poem and for your kind reply. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Deb. Your reply was very sweet. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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