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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-11-18 06:51 PM


When couples are together
and see each other every day
Often get used to the other,
not taking time to play
They get so very busy
in their every day lives
And forget the importance
of pleasing husbands and wives
When they first met,
each was the other's priority
Forgetting about this
happens to a large majority
When doing this they are
taking each other for granted
not using time to cultivate
the love that was planted
Love is like a fragile plant
for it to last and grow
It has to be nurtured
and strong roots it will show
Never forgetting to let each other
know the love you feel
Not keeping it inside
let the other know it's real
So even though we get lonesome
with between us all these miles
Let's help our love to grow,
in spite of our troubles and trials
Putting the other first,
so important should be
If contented I'll make you,
then the same you'll make me
Our love will continue to grow,
and this will change, not ever
Of this I'm completely sure,
we will survive life's stormy weather
Absence makes the heart grow fonder,
I've heard the years through,
But this I think depends on,
how strong the love betwen the two
So, if away from each other,
and we have to be apart
Let us tenderly take care of
the love planted in our hearts

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-11-18 07:12 PM


Hello Ethel

Your words spoke volumes and I think we all need to be reminded not to take each other for granted.  Thank you.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-11-18 07:16 PM


Thank you, Sue, for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. I appreciate such a talent as yourself reading my poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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3 posted 2002-11-18 07:26 PM


So, if away from each other,
and we have to be apart
Let us tenderly take care of
the love planted in our hearts

All too true! I really liked your poem. Well done!

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-11-18 07:29 PM


Munda, thanks very much for reading my poem. I apprciate your reply, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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5 posted 2002-11-18 07:36 PM


Love is like a fragile plant
for it to last and grow
It has to be nurtured
and strong roots it will show
Never forgetting to let each other
know the love you feel
Not keeping it inside
let the other know it's real
So even though we get lonesome
with between us all these miles
Let's help our love to grow,
in spite of our troubles and trials
Putting the other first,
so important should be
If contented I'll make you,
then the same you'll make me
===============================

and your poem blooms with wisdom in its rhymes...
a wonderful write of the truth in holding on to what matters most...we do get caught up in the day to day and forget.
well done Poetess

No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-11-18 07:44 PM


garysgirl - love is like a fragile plant, needs to be nourished and taken care of, as it's very delicate. I know that you will be fine with yours...

BC

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7 posted 2002-11-18 07:50 PM


How true is this Ethel??!!
Very wise words from you today!!
~Mega hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-11-18 07:50 PM


'... Let us tenderly take care of
the love planted in our hearts ...'

Ethel, your poem speaks volumes. My Hon and I have been married almost 34 years and we still love each other as much as the day we married and enjoy being together. Playing is the key.

Huggles, Marti


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9 posted 2002-11-18 07:52 PM


enjoyed
garysgirl
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10 posted 2002-11-18 07:56 PM


Janet Marie, I really appreciate you reading my poem and for your reply, too.
I love your poetry, sweet lady.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

garysgirl
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11 posted 2002-11-18 08:08 PM


Bill, thank you for reading and replying to my poem.
Yes, I hope that Gary and I will always remember how precious and fragile our love really is.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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12 posted 2002-11-18 08:10 PM


Nancy Lee, thank you very much. The words said from such a wise lady made me feel good. I appreciate you reading my poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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13 posted 2002-11-18 08:16 PM


Martie, thanks for reading and replying. I'm glad that you and your "Hon" get along so well after so many years.
I've learned from mistakes through the years, and so has Gary. So, hopefully we can make our lives together more happy than with our other marriages.
Yes, I think "playing" is the key, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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14 posted 2002-11-18 08:17 PM


Vandanna, thank you very much for reading my poem and for your reply. I appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Madame Chipmunk
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15 posted 2002-11-18 11:32 PM


This is a truly beautiful poem with lots of truths in it, Ethel...
Love should never be taken for granted
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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16 posted 2002-11-18 11:32 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so wisely said, sweet friend, I want to make my love Joanna the most happiest girl she can be and I want to be hers and never want to make her feel doubted or unspecial one moment as I always want to make her shine like a palm tree on a sunny day! (kiss on cheek) May you and Gary's love only grow brighter forever, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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17 posted 2002-11-19 12:27 PM


Ethel~ These are words to live by, so often we take our mates for granted, only to relize how much we love them after they are gone. As I say " Love me while I am here don't wish you would have after I am gone"...Paul
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18 posted 2002-11-19 01:10 AM


Lyra, thanks so much for reading and replying to my poem. I hope that Gary and I never take each other for granted.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

garysgirl
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19 posted 2002-11-19 01:19 AM


Noah, thank you so much for reading and replying to my poem. I know that you will be very good to your Joanna and cherish your love so that it will grow.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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20 posted 2002-11-19 01:21 AM


Paul,
Thank you very much for reading and replying to my poem. Those are very wise words you said. Thank you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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21 posted 2002-11-20 03:04 PM


Hi garysgirl - a good reminder of priorities and not to take advantage of one another.

Thanks for this,

Cor

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22 posted 2002-11-20 03:40 PM


Let us tenderly take care of
the love planted in our hearts

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

A very gentle loving poem.
Enjoyed!

Deb

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23 posted 2002-11-21 12:31 PM


Corrine, thank you for reading my poem and
for your kind reply. I appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

garysgirl
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24 posted 2002-11-21 12:33 PM


Thank you, Deb. Your reply was very sweet. I
appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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