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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Current he touched me and I went crashing through his skin like electricity redecorating me causing tattooed bumps of chill hair stood on end as moments melted in the shock I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
and a near periodic format to go along. electrifying! (sorry i couldn't pass that one up.) -majnu -------------------------------------- Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet. [This message has been edited by majnu (11-18-2002 04:44 PM).] |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, I like it. It felt like a shock of electricity going through. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - yes, it would be like that... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Helen, I just love this, sweet friend, your beautiful words spark an electrical storm here, I love the lightning you cast with words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh YES!!!!!! I could feel that shock!!! Beautifully expressed, Helen  ~ shocked rodent hugsLyra |
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