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theSunflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 11 |
Paranoia sets in....questions run through my mind without care of sun or moon. I sit inside my head and discuss with my sanity the logically reasons why she should stay. But I have no logic without her so my pleas bare no relevance. I am left now with nothing except regret, for what? I know not. Empty and broken, a pathetic shell of what I once was, and facing forever with the nagging knowledge that this all could have been avoided if I'd only have....... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
It was good, but I recomend that you put it in a slightly more poetic form. That would add a little to it. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) I can understand this, sweet friend, somehow when it comes to relationships and human emotions logic is something that never is imminent yet there is knowledge and it can be so confusing to decide what is logic or not! (sigh) I send angel hugs of comfort your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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