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Pardon the re-write
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Pardon the re-write |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
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Saltwater Marsh This interest of the sea in claiming; the subtle way it feels, easing salinity, as tidal influences layer themselves throughout the estuary. The river yields, eventually, its youth into a marsh. We all ooze naturally, whether as fog, cool and nervous, or warmth, deliciously composed as though the south had transported languor and the smooth, round hips of swamps up north. Only the heron stalks idly, unmoved by sex or love, its beauty, frozen. RMW |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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Bob I like the subtle change here...making it more human. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
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Martie ... it is not there yet, but thank you. Bob |
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