Closing my eyes&opening my heart

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Open Poetry #23

Closing my eyes&opening my heart

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2002-11-17 02:58 PM

Closing my eyes & opening my heart
When I feel that I need you
to hold my hand
to look in your eyes

When I feel that I am alone
Needing your heart
Wishing to see your face

When I feel that I miss you
And I could not live without you

Closing my eyes & opening my heart
start feeling that you are with me Coz
I can see you through the darkness
And I feel your heart near of mine

Closing my eyes & opining my heart
when I Need You here with me
When I feel that I am alone
When I miss you

You always be with me
If I was there or here
I love to think about you
when my eyes is closing & my heart
is opening...

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

[This message has been edited by secretlife (11-17-2002 04:23 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-11-17 04:09 PM

The write of one,  saying so clearly the
desires for another...  Regarding your
poetry,  if you have a spell checker,  use
it....I think it will help you a great deal.

Your poetry will be enhanced by that...my
honest opinion...as you have requested..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-11-17 04:18 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for true love to always open up the pedals of your heart and sing with happiness! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

3 posted 2002-11-17 04:28 PM

Thanx so much dear Magnus for your honest opinion, yes I will try to use that spell checker.
Thanx alot

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-11-17 04:31 PM

enjoyed

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