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Boughs of Rain
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Boughs of Rain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Boughs of Rain The boughs bow down in wet and strain Under the weight of waters rain And drop-by-drop the petals dance To place me in a dreamers trance And weary turns to passive leery Making eerie of the bleary That sends me into hues of taupe Into a line of pleasures warp For in the mist I see her clear Warm and gentle, very near. Waiting in the inculcate To maximize and validate And when she looks into my eyes I melt into a million sighs And when her presence takes me in My heart turns into living skin. She is my Eve of unrestraint That ever lives my mind in faint. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I just love this. This is a beautiful poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then I'd pen a lover's note as she'd glance upon a quote for she loves to dance the flame just to sigh me Randy's name.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, it rained in this part of Florida yesterday, too. I loved your poetry as I always do. tTanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Seymour, "The boughs bow down in wet and strain Under the weight of waters rain and drop-by-drop the petals dance To place me in a dreamers trance" I just love  this. I have read this aloud and the sound of the words just add to the meaning so beautifully. This is a keeper. Top of the morning to you! SimplyGold |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh good, a million Sy's..... Just about what this world needs... smiling here... Great poem. Of course that is an understatement. It is beautiful. Enjoyed. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (11-17-2002 08:39 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
That sends me into hues of taupe Into a line of pleasures warp For in the mist I see her clear Warm and gentle, very near. Waiting in the inculcate To maximize and validate And when she looks into my eyes I melt into a million sighs And when her presence takes me in My heart turns into living skin. She is my Eve of unrestraint That ever lives my mind in faint. ==================================== Look at you hanging the moon and making us all swoon  When you *sigh* we all *sigh* me Stinkylove. and these will be my cooler than cool lines for the day...... That sends me into hues of taupe Into a line of pleasures warp Waiting in the inculcate To maximize and validate ahhhh that poetic mind of yours...  *winkiewinkie*   and Sunshine...Im still smiling at you No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely morning read Sy! I look forward to mornings with you. ~Morning hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you dear. Sunshine Oh Randy knows your there. garysgirl Thank you for reading and repling. SimplyGold Top of the morning to you too and thank you. Pat, Thanks for the beautiful. JM, "hanging the moon and making us all swoon." You are so cute. If the moon hits your eye like a big pitzza pie, It must be Sy. Randy made me say that. WWRS  Enchantress, And I look forward to writing for you. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good Morning Sy ... another of your wonderful and enchanting poems to start my day. ' ... The boughs bow down in wet and strain Under the weight of waters rain ...' Your rain is our snow! This goes so well with my morning tea. Huggles, Marti |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Seymour, now I will be walking around sighing all day!! lol. This is just so beautiful. Thankyou for this on a slightly snowy Ontario morn. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Thank you always enjoy your replies. Chris, Sorry about the snow, but it will do the same thing. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, I know that feeling too of melting by my sweethearts own sighs and how it feels like singing in the warm rain! (big hugggsssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love the words....going to my dictionary for one of the....NO, won't tell which one... You sly old devil! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Afternoon, dear, darling Mr. T.! I simply LOVE this one! You never cease to amaze me! How can you keep this up?!? ~ muchos smoochos! EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
JM, "hanging the moon and making us all swoon." You are so cute. If the moon hits your eye like a big pitzza pie, It must be Sy. ============================ Now who is being cute LOL I JUST LOVE when you and Randy speak Italian LOLAhhhh Sy you make me smile at your winkie wile |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the lovely. Barry, Won't tell, now whose being sly? LOL Earth Angel You know what they say, where there is a wlll there is a way. Thank you for the muchos smoochos. JM, Yes I can speak every language but greek and if you say anything in any language that I don't understand, then it must be Greek. LOL WW |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beatiful write, Sy... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you scorpio. vandana Thank you. |
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