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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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At times I wish only to fill the space between water and vase, star and bright of light in corner of eye, that tiny place where I, might get lost yet feel enclosed. I wish for mere slight of movement for an instant, trapped in miniscule space, only a second, no more, then escape, a free fall into vast, at last but changed by coccoon of small, released by the least of freedom. WhiteRose 11/16/03 "my reflection becomes me" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...a freefall into vast, atlast... A favorite line among many here. Good thoughts. ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I sure did feel like a little element of Oxygen here. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, I can relate to this. Sometimes I'd like to be in a tiny space in between no where, at least just for a little while.  SimplyGold |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is excellent..it reminds me of the concept of "swaddling" a newborn--the idea being to recreate the confines of the womb, for some babies are born alarmed at their newfound freedom. If anyone pages Dr. Freud to analyze me--can I poke them in the eye?  Hugs you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
At times I wish only to fill the space between the water and the vase I love the excellent imagery here, Anne... It totally conveys that feeling of "small"  ~ hugs and grinsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Anne, I understand this feeling, sweet friend, whether you're crowded in fame and want to find a place where there's plenty of breathing room or you're simply trying to find a refuge of serenity, this is common for all! (big hugggsssss) May you always find this little place in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No, dear rose of white, you require a much larger space...to hold all that talent of yours! EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now shrinking to the size of a mere grain of sand............between the water and the vase....... Like the thought this conveys...nicely done Anne... |
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