Walk The Walk - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-11-16 08:12 AM

Ethereal..
One word that comes to mind
upon the sight of you, slowly
walking toward...or, better yet...
Away...

Inspiring, mesmerizing...
As the sway of you captures my
mind, halting all mental processes...
save perhaps two, maybe three...
Unconsciously stumbling.
A whipped cream can beneath
my feet...

Ahhh, but the gentle sway that
takes the curves, molds them,
molds me...

May the walk always be,
for you do.....

Walk the walk.....

Forget the talk!!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-11-16 08:26 AM

Magnus...for an early Saturday morning read?
For some reason, I'm think "saucy" here...
and smiling...big time!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-11-16 08:27 AM

Yes, deep, abiding unspoken love.

You capture the essence of being in love so well. This is heart-stopping in it's portrayal of what it is like.

Love it!

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-11-16 12:57 PM

I'm sure she smiles walking away, knowing you're looking!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-11-16 01:03 PM

How beautifully romantic this is, Barry...
lovely imagery also

~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-16 04:28 PM

(smiles) Talk is cheap, a little less conversation and a little more action and faithfulness is what true beauty and romance always needs! (big hugggssssss) This is so wonderfully said, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2002-11-16 05:37 PM

Magnus,

Another gem. Had to peek to see what you "pips" have been up to lately. Gee, I'm glad I did!

SimplyGold

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-11-16 05:42 PM

It's the whipped cream cans that got me...
Speechless...
TD

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

8 posted 2002-11-16 05:43 PM

It was definately the whipped cream cans for me too. This is delightful Barry.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-11-16 05:55 PM

enjoyed

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2002-11-16 07:55 PM

Magnus - I enjoyed this write - it reminded me of Marilyn Monroe's walk...she certainly could "sway" couldn't she?!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.