Open Poetry #23 |
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In From the Cold---running amok again |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
In From the Cold Coming in from the cold a blast of heat slaps you in the face but then reaches its arm around your shoulders and pulls you in in to the promise of its comfort in where camaraderie waits in memories of comfort food warm coffee cat fur with meows of “Hello.” Over-stuffed furniture waits to do its duty yet you pass by seeking a word from someone, anyone, a kind of, “Welcome home.” The message machine doesn’t flash, but alas, just perhaps the online line will bring results. Maybe someone stopped in looking for your eyes to see what they thought of thee or of the leaking of your cyber-pen upon the pages of space. Reward! It’s good to be home. ©November 16, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Virginia, it is a good warm cozy inviting home, isn't it? Purr. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome, Virginia...I love this "home of blue" we've found here, too. This is a cute poem to me. BTW...I've just got to thank you for the laugh I got from your reply on the "Run" poem. I'm still giggling. You turned my tickle box over for some reason. In fact, I keep seeing everybody tapping their foot and it's so comical. Can you just see somebody watching us through the window or something?!? HaHa!! Oh, I found my foot doing the same as yours when I came to the end of a line. Goodness, I can't quit giggling!! (I decided to come back here just to let anyone else who may read this know that I'm in no way making fun of a poem. I just thought it was a cute and funny picture of all of us sitting at our computers tapping our feet while reading the poem. I wondered last night when I read it if everybody else was going to do what I did. Apparently so!!!!) "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-16-2002 03:38 PM).] |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes! Loved this, felt like I was walking through the house in your footsteps....Can relate to this feel in the afternoons some times... Yeah, just turn on the comp. switch to the pip channel and presto....you're at home! |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Virginia, This is really wonderful and so true....we can always come home, stay as long as we want, be dressed in our jammies and even have coffee stains on our shirts....he he heee!! There isn't anyone here to scold "tsk..tsk..tsk." hugs, Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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