Open Poetry #23 |
Shhhhh - Early Morn |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pan, he hides behind Willow’s flowing dress of green, See pond sprites laughing Spy hoof of him, dancing still In the early morning light Photograph by K. R. Jungel [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-17-2002 09:43 AM).] |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I read this as defiance of fear. Of course, I could have read it very wrong, but that's how it came out to me. Like fear loses its hold in the morning. Much happiness! Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellw is, but I know where to find him. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Almost missed this....speaking strongly of one who has come out to play, yet hiding among the willows...waiting...giggling.. full of whatever the wind blows.. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Shh..I think I see him! Beautifully done - love the photo. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A delightful read, Karilea... a game of hide and seek ~ loving hugs Lyra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful picture Karilea. You are becoming our mistress of photography with your new camera. Ssshhhh.....Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Pan comes out to play in Sun's shine. Wonderful...love it! ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a beautiful image! Nicely done as always....you're vision is super! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A wonderful tanka - and a wonderful photo - I hope you took this one - it's gorgeous.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very enjoyable, Karilea...the poem, the picture, and the thoughts of playing "hide and seek". "Love makes the world go around" |
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