Open Poetry #23 |
A Toast In Red |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
And we, like fine wine, must wait the returning Aged to perfection, a friendship, deepening To follow through the chill as emotions winter To hunger… And we, to sleep, in the solitary caves of contemplation Allowed distance, and searching, a love on firm ground To follow in your footsteps, my arms around you To thirst… And we, to welcome with gratitude, the awakening Agony in perfect pounding rhythm, sparkling and sweet To follow in your empty heart, my own empty heart To ache… And we, to breathe the fresh air of the becoming Aged to perfection, lovers, in heart and mind as one To follow and revel in your laughter, and in your prayers To play… And we, to love a lifetime, without interruption, without end A story in the deepening, the sowing of seeds so fragile To follow in the images of dreams and fantasies To love… And I, to seek my very soul, uninhibited in your eyes A deepening still, as you become my blood on fire To follow where life takes you, and to be there To share… Copyright Kkh 11/15/02 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This has the flavor of a romantic vintage of the finest..... Posessing all the pieces needed to have a lasting love... As only you can express through your brilliant poetry... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, halcyon days are especially bright when there is a round of cheers! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Exquisite write in every way!! "I am a sky where spirits live. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is as beautiful as poetry can get. I stand in awe of your mind and ability to reproduce thoughts this great, in fabulous poetic form. Oh, my....I believe this is the most special falling in long, lasting love poem I ever have or ever will read. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Many thanks my friends...much inspiration here, from all of you. ThisDiamond |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is absolutely lovely, Kathy... I can't pick a favorite part because they are all my favorite ~ loving hugs from the chipmunk in Kzoo Lyra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, Kathleen, this is beautiful. I'm going to keep it so I can read it over and over without losing it on these pages of blue. Thanks for sharing your wondrful poetry with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And I...think that this is pure poetry.. beautiful, romantic and oh so very well penned. Absolutley love this keeper! ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
It doesn't get much better than this. Wonderful, creative, good flow and imaginative. All the ingredients of a fantastic poem. Hope all is well for you in Michigan. Huggles, Marti |
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