Open Poetry #23 |
I Love You Without Question |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * You're my oasis in the desert My island in the sun The one I dream of often For me, you are the one You are always there beside me Through times of deep distress How my heart grows ever fonder When I feel your warm caress You are the jewel in my crown Such a treasure to behold Your love bears no comparison It is worth much more than gold I love you without question One heart now beats for two But most of all I love you For simply being you I am in motion |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Cool picture and write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, the gorgeous artwork perfectly fits your colorful words, may his love always bless your golden heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. This rhyme's so beautifully and the words are so loving. This is my favorite stanza: '... I love you without question One heart now beats for two But most of all I love you For simply being you ...' With your hand in mine With my heart entwined with yours We have become one I love being in love. Huggles, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my, Sue, I love this. I've got to keep it. Thanks for sharing. |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
very nice ...*S*...j |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue; A lovely poem and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sending the link. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Everything about this Sue... makes me say publish. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very nice write flows like butter |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful poetic love poem! The wordsmithing in this is wonderful! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, this is just soooo beautiful. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read. |
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