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jstewart
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0 posted 2002-11-16 12:26 PM



you can take my money
and close my accounts
but i wouldn't care
a brighter day waits for me

you can take my car
and change my title
but i wouldn't care
a brighter day waits for me

you can take my home
and change my deed
but i wouldn't care
a brighter day waits for me

you can take my life
and close my casket
but i wouldn't care
a brighter day waits for me

you can have anything of mine material
you may never take my soul
my soul is eternal
a brighter day waits for me

© Copyright 2002 Jeffery Stewart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-16 12:30 PM




Yay, that's the spirit! And as long as you be the loving you, beauty will always find your way! (big hugggssssss) I'm so happy you're here, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a beautifully optimistic sentimnent from your golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeffrey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-16 12:38 PM



Jeffery, I believe once you take a moment to sit back, you're going to discover all of the facets of Passions!  I can tell now tha you're enjoying yourself.  Continue on your road of discovery...this is a good place to be!

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3 posted 2002-11-16 11:35 PM


Jstewart,

Your poems are evolving even as I continue to read them. Keep them coming, I look forward to watching your emergence.

I liked this much.
SG

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