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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2002-11-15 11:38 PM

With feet on the ground,

I focus on what is real.

I prefer the dream.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-11-15 11:42 PM

Tell me about it!!!! Good one, Kacy.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-11-15 11:46 PM

Hey Duncan! OK, so it belongs to you now.
??? the dream? or the poem?
Only your muse knows which.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-11-15 11:46 PM

Focus comes and goes
hold easy reality
see it shimmering
dreams become reality
it is in the come and go

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2002-11-15 11:47 PM

fo sho

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-11-15 11:47 PM

Nice reply, Karilea.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-11-15 11:48 PM

WALT!!! welcome home

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-11-15 11:56 PM

(sigh) Oh Kacy, I too prefer the dream, and frankly I think dreams are much less ridiculous than what you hear in the news nowadays because dreams are all you! (sigh) I wish I could sleep 24 hours any day I want and dream of happiness all day, this is wonderfully said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

8 posted 2002-11-16 11:12 PM

Midnitesun,

Good one. I agree. Short and right to the target...Well done!

SG

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2002-11-16 11:39 PM

Reality blurs
When your lens zooms in too close
To the honest Truth...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

10 posted 2002-11-16 11:44 PM

Right now, I too, prefer the dream... Kacy
An excellent write

~ dreamy chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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