Open Poetry #23 |
Whispers In Silence |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Silence now pervades the halls listen, soft the heart does call with gentle beat, a loving sound while quiet now is all around. Hear and feel the lack of noise the whispers now have a voice, in breathy sighs now I speak of what I know, of what I see. An angel I have seen this day in minds eye, though far away with golden hair and eyes of blue my precious, how I'm missing you. I've also heard in dinless pause silent cries, I know because even though they were so slight I felt the tears upon, alight. Now within this mothers heart the sting, the pierce of guilty dart but alas, I'll still stand tall I've not the option now to fall. I'll always listen within the quiet though sometimes the feelings riot, rage against the futile past I'll ever listen until the last, message sent upon the wind, comes to me in lack of din. WhiteRose 11/15/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Anne...this is so beautiful......yet so sad. You can certainly write talented poetry. I enjoy your work. "Love makes the world go around" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Ethel, for reading and for being so kind as to respond. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hugs for the mother in you M |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
So very poignant! this touched me deeply.. you versed the emotions with such excellence hugs , my friend, Cher Poetry is: |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Maureen, the hugs are appreciated. Sunshine, thanks so much for the candle light. Thank you Cher, your support and comments mean a lot. |
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