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scorpio
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0 posted 2002-11-15 11:02 AM



Berry to Go

Red berry on sumac
Plucked and eaten by robin
Fuel for the south trip.


...believe what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by scorpio (11-15-2002 02:36 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-15 11:04 AM



Yours, Haiku.

Canadian wings
black and white on V'd display
honk "move aside please"


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-15 11:08 AM


This is absolutely adorable!

EA

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3 posted 2002-11-15 11:26 AM



Excellent write!
And also enjoyed K's.

scorpio
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4 posted 2002-11-15 11:33 AM


Thank you for the confirmation... syllable counting challenges me...your response was beautiful...

Glad you liked it Earth Angel...your haikus and senyrus inspire us...

Midnitesun, I appreciate your kind support...

...believe what your heart feels...

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-11-15 11:40 AM


Red berries
Adornments of sky
Placed upon this wreath
Warm, remembrance

Absolutely wonderful! ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2002-11-15 11:47 AM


Let's land, my fair scouts
Fill 'er up, we got aways
Still to get down south



(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, your wonderful talent is versatile and colorful, I love canadian geese and all birds so much and am blessed to see stellar jays and flickers on my birdfeeder during the winter too! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scopio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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7 posted 2002-11-15 02:48 PM


Wonderful dear Scorpio...
tell me ..were they cranberries?

The green willow branch
Hearing the swan's farewell call,
Shivers in the breeze.

~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

scorpio
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8 posted 2002-11-15 02:56 PM


Thank you ThisDiamond...I enjoyed your reply!!

Noah...please take care of my flickers...I want them back next spring...thank you for your words of support...

Sweet Enchantress...Sumac bushes produce a berry that migrating robins like to forage on...I too have fond memories of the soft calls of the swans each fall and spring on my favourite marsh...watching them fly over me...

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