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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-11-14 11:05 PM

sublime decadence
all inhibitions run wild
lunar escapades
skinny-dipping by moonlight
while the man in the moon sleeps

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-11-14 11:29 PM

Perfection! --and my kind of fun! This is a poetic gem!!!

~ May your nights always be full of such magic

Linda

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2002-11-14 11:33 PM

Hey Cherie!
Long time no see!

What an awesome tanka! You're soooo good at these.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-14 11:40 PM

Cher, I love this......skinny-dipping while the moon sleeps. It made me smile.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-11-15 01:07 AM

I guess the man in the moon must have gotten quite a view....
lovely words, Cheryl

~ many chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

5 posted 2002-11-15 01:12 AM

This is really an awesome tanka! But isn't it a bit cold out to be skinny dipping?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-15 11:37 AM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I remember this one, sweet friend, I'm so happy you re-posted it as I always imagine skinny-dipping on the light side of the moon and finding the colors on the dark side of it! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beatiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-11-15 11:41 AM

Awesome...teach that sleepy man in the moon!
ThisDiamond

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2002-11-15 11:46 AM

Wonderful images created in this poem...Cheryl...I enjoyed it very much.

...believe what your heart feels...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2002-11-15 02:05 PM

are you sure he was asleep? If he was peeking then it was a rare night of the double moon... ( grinning)

very nice piece... I enjoyed

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

10 posted 2002-11-15 02:10 PM

Cher, This is so soft and light. Enjoyed.

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