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Write Me Your Poetry (sonnet) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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*~*Share with me your laughter and joy and the pains you would hold inside, take me into that special place where your inner light does reside. Gently reaching out with your words show me the tracks of fallen tears, tenderly I will hold your hand when you are whispering your fears. Allow me to walk in your thoughts while teaching me the who of you and know this deep within your soul that YOUR words will always ring true. In this is held the heart of "we" My friends write me, your poetry.*~* "When we're torn apart, shattered and scarred, love has the grace to save us" Saints and Angels as sung by Sarah Evans [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-15-2002 10:59 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes...many here to share some wonderful thoughts and writing... enjoyed this! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and may poetry always write to your heart with smiles and cheer, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Donna, this is just stunning. Simply lovely. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Donna I just loved each and every word and could relate so very well, as I'm sure everyone else can. Thank you for sharing your kind heart with us. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Donna, beautifully written words of your own....and yes, we shall share our own with you!! Gladly! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This one really has heart. So very lovely, my friend.  *hugs*The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I love to read your beautiful words of poetry and I appreciate you sharing them with me. thank you, sweet Donna. "Love makes the world go around" |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a wonderful call for all poets. -majnu |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
...*S*... thankyou J |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely sweet poetess. And here at Passions we all love to share of love of writing. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely Donna - enjoyed. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Gentle Spirit, Thank you for this. How sweet, how pure. You are such a bright spot with your words and expression of care. (lucky for me that I peeked in) SimplyGold |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
a lovely, loving sonnet, Donna... and a wonderful call to all poets here  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I loved this poem. I loved this best though. Allow me to walk in your thoughts while teaching me the who of you Outstanding verse.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Gently reaching out with your words show me the tracks of fallen tears, tenderly I will hold your hand when you are whispering your fears." Huummm very nicely expressed as is all the rest. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
and they write in response as they come to the call showing their love and giving their all this, almost a prayer has called us to see the gift of your love and shared poetry. Lovely. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I have a friend who reads you often... she told me I would be in for a treat. She was right. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'll write ya a poem, For one kiss per verse Hundreds of stanzas To quinch my thirst. If the "length" of the poem, Should lead to more, I'll try to learn poetry, (That's what friends are for).. Lovely write gal..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I personally love to write poetry to share...and it's nice to know someone like you wants to be a part of that. Thanks Donna. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
"The who of you". Perhaps also, the "what of I". Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis is so lovely and so inspirational and beautifully written HUgs Liz |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cpat yes there are so many who touch our lives with their words. Thank you dearly. Noah sweetie, may poetry always touch your heart too dear friend. Hugs. Ah Rose, Thank you. That is so appreciated.\ Sue, your own words have touched me deeply so many times. Thank you for reading and I am glad that you enjoyed. Magnus, I am grateful for the sharing. It sure makes life sweeter don't it? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank Michael and thank you for sharing your heart also! Ethel you humble me with your kindness. Thanks!! Majnu thank you and may all poets here the call. Stubby thank YOU. I appreciate that. Yes Nancy my sweet poet friend and thank God that we all do. Hugs hon! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris thank you for always taking the time to read sweetie. Hugs. Awww SG, thank you. That was so kind of you! Lyra hugs and prayers to you my friend. We think of you everyday dear. Se, you know how much I appreciate you and your kindness. thanks. Ethome, thanks my Canadian friend. Hugs. Kethry what a beautiful verse. I treasure it! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Soleil I thank both you and your friend! That means so much to me. Hugs. Toe, sweetie, this is wonderful. Thank you!! Dixie girl, you write em and I will gladly read em!! Your poetry is pure and from your heart and always a treat to read!! MR yes that could work depending on what the thought behind the poem is, but in this case the who of you worked best for me. Show me Who you are through your words is where I was heaading with that. thanks! Liz, thank you for reading and also for sharing your talent and gift with us all at Passions. Hugs to all at poetry land. Whew, I really need to catch up on my replies to all, but I would rather use that time to read everyone else! Peace to all and Hugs. ~D~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem, Donna from a kind and caring person. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
"Give me your tired, your poor, your troubled masses yearning to be free," Your call here is as strong as Lady Liberty's. |
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