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gheber
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0 posted 2002-12-12 02:39 AM




I borrowed words born long a ago
To capture feelings born in me
I put them down on paper
So that you could clearly see
From the moment I first saw you
Up until this very day
Your presence moves my spirit
In a very special way
You fill my waking moments
You’re even there at night
You probably don’t feel the same
But then again you might
Experience tells me I should run
My heart tells me I can’t
It’s like wondering which seed to sow
Once you’ve grown the plant
It’s much too late to wonder
Which way the wind will blow
I don’t know where we’re headed
But I know I want to go


© Copyright 2002 Gerry E. Heber - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-12 08:40 AM


last two lines says it all...

enjoyed

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-12 08:46 AM


Sounds like it might be worth the chance to follow your heart!

~ May your plant blossom and grow!

Earth Angel

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3 posted 2002-12-12 12:38 PM


nice...I can relate.
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-12-12 01:55 PM


Very nice Gerry.  Sometimes you gotta go with what ya feel.  Well done.
MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2002-12-12 09:35 PM


Enjoyed the flow as I "went with it"...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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