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Till The Morn
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Till The Morn |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Dawn’s light came to the meadow as stooping candles flickered and eyes gleamed. Leaves tickling the winter’s fancy as flakes of white fell silently upon a meadow once green. Till the morn of the morrow. Till the moon gleam does wane. Whence I come knocking, a fire will burn with passion’s flames. Extinguish the candles gently a whisper once softly pled. Yes love, I will....as each flame turns to a wisp of rising gray, as each wax tear freezes the wick......I will For lace dances before my eyes as each mile passes into the rise of our sun....as the throb of my desire beats loudly within me..... Till the morn my love.... Till the morn.. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Whispers beautifully! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What Sandpiper said, so quietly... this is gently caressing thoughts of the night, Magnus, a soothing write... I shall come back before I retire just to read once more... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very gentle piece dear poet. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry With this you are the king of tender romance. Your lady is lucky. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful poem, Barry. It has the old world feel that I love. Sandra |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is pleasantly romantic, so soft and soothing....whispery...special! I like it a great deal. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Exquisitely soft and tender.. I agree the lady is very fortunate hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem has a comforting cadence, is enchantingly enticing, warmly welcoming, liltingly lovely, and romantically riveting. EA |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
This is simply beautiful and beautifully romantic. You truly are the poet of the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, have you noticed how all of us ladies like to read your romantic poetry ?!? I hope that you read it to your lady !! "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Surely she will quiver in the breath of such deep and sensual rapture. So many connections in these lines of gold. Exceptional. ThisDiamond |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Awww, lovely as the romantic masters of olde. Well done, Magnus, you do sweet caresses of the heart so well. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautifully sensual and romantic, sweet friend, I too always smile when I look at the snow and think of the purity, of the whitness of it, and to dream of having my Joanna holding my hand in the future and staring out that window to the winter sky brings tears to my eyes! (big huggsssssss) This is so lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Till the morn of the morrow. Till the moon gleam does wane. Whence I come knocking, a fire will burn with passion's flames. Extinguish the candles gently a whisper once softly pled. Yes love, I will....as each flame turns to a wisp of rising gray, as each wax tear freezes the wick......I will ================================== well ya knew the moth had to fly in this flame.  this is LOVELY Barry...wonderful imagery, phrasing and romantic intend... the "wax tears" is an awesome image and personification!! very cool poet sir.!! No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry You know how much I love your words of love and romance and once again I have been swept away by your exquisite words. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow! All of you amaze me with the wealth of warm words given to me....I guess that we all have things in our lives we enjoy and dream of...sometimes capturing in our realities.... Thanx very much to you all... |
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