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chanting charm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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and now, upon a cloth of blue an altar is array... I took the card of mage, and dealt the card of fool away-- My own sarcasm interfered. I took high priestess for myself for that is what the fools call me-- I took the lovers--placed beneath and prayed someday they be released; inspite of all my fears. The hermit always was my guide shining lantern on the hill... I dreamed of lighthouse, once, but now...I see that certainly-- that's me. reluctant beacon, beckoning.... My ginger blossomed-- amazed am I-- it bloomed she boasted through monsoon... Lilies red I cut for dead because I think that they'll bloom too. Salt within a clay dish kept. residual of tears we've wept. candles spill vanilla squall that show the shadow of me--tall-- burn these pieces I don't need.. corn is but a bull's concede... a pestle in a mortar--pressed-- maize--amazed--I cannot rest. To think that I was granted such... miracle of god/dess touch-- I open heart and open arms and know that all illusions be... I weave the clover chanting charm and pray there is a prayer ...for me. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-01-2002 01:09 AM).] |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Tarot is good deep imagery Flowing verse well written good words what more can i say Liked it lots The very deep did rot: O Christ! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..serenity blaze../\..indeed, enjoyed reading; very songlike; very nice.. ../\..Spiros --------------------- |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well done, Serenity - There is a prayer for you - I pray you will keep writing this well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Salt within a clay dish kept. residual of tears we've wept. candles spill vanilla squall that show the shadow of me--tall-- burn these pieces I don't need.. corn is but a bull's concede... a pestle in a mortar--pressed-- maize--amazed--I cannot rest. To think that I was granted such... miracle of god/dess touch-- I open heart and open arms and know that all illusions be... I weave the clover chanting charm and pray there is a prayer ...for me. ================================== anyone ever tell you yer beautiful when your turning symbols into poetry and rhymes divine?    Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I don't know if I've ever told you... but... you re mind me of Stevie Nicks  I hope you don't mind me saying that.I really enjoyed this Luscious Maree adding to my library. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ooops sorry clicked twice  [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (11-01-2002 03:47 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ummm Karen......this is fantabulous. How do you do that?  I want a scratching my head smiley.........KIT.......OH KIT......where are you? [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-01-2002 03:51 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"To think that I was granted such... miracle of god/dess touch-- I open heart and open arms and know that all illusions be... I weave the clover chanting charm and pray there is a prayer ...for me." Karen....I read, I listen, I like...and try to understand...and somewhere I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"To think that I was granted such... miracle of god/dess touch-- I open heart and open arms and know that all illusions be... I weave the clover chanting charm and pray there is a prayer ...for me." Wow!!! Oh my gosh, I agree with Dark Angel, you do remind me of Stevie Nicks, you aways display both the blessings and troubles in Shangri-La! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I got Sorcerer with Sheryl Crow in my head reading this over and over again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And as you spin and chant in style we see the real without beguile |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank you all kindly for enjoying last night's altar with me... it was a quiet one for a change... and not bad... grin.. thanks all.. (serenity exits, looking for aloe for her scorched finger...  ) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
For you I read the Celtic Cross You need not fear--not all is lost The spread of Aces, four in all, Your life begins anew this fall. EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful...simply wonderful! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I can sense the peace here, and the quiet, heating wait. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You have pestled me a fine grind And placed it in my mind. Now I am a firefly With amber wings of why. Excellent write, enjoyed. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem, serenity blaze. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Serenity, tis magic..... now......how do you do that?  (aint that KIT just great!) "When we're torn apart, shattered and scarred, love has the grace to save us" Saints and Angels as sung by Sarah Evans [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-15-2002 05:45 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....I always enjoy the rhythm of your written thoughts....and this is certainly no exception.... |
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